t h e
d o o m
g e n e r a t i o n







   
a heterosexual movie by gregg araki.







   

1. 1.
int-HELL.night

ULTRA SLO-MO
Bodies. Hardly distinguishable as bodies even. More like Blurs. Forms. Shadows. Falling. Thrashing. Colliding. A surrealistic, choreographed human demolition derby intermittently lit by pulsating strobes. (All cloaked in pure mysterious SILENCE like some underwater ballet...
intercut


opening TITLES

2. 2.
One of the SLO-MO BODIES in particular is singled out, spotlighted. A lean, pubescent KID with messy hair. His fair-skinned, nubile torso emerging as his ripped t-shirt gets more and more ripped (like practically torn off his body) in the swirling melee.

SUDDENLY
The action explodes into real-time 24fps FRENZY as eardum-pulverizing INDUSTRIAL-DEATH THUNDER obliterates the silence. It's the Apocalypse set to a disco beat. (And here is as good a place as any to mention the double-LP soundtrack composed by like Trent (NINE INCH NAILS) Reznor (or whoever)).

The Kid, JORDAN WHITE (17), is in the middle of a slamdancing pit - gyrating, whirling, fists flying, his "Life is Shit" t-shirt shredding in the sweaty firestorm.
cut to


3. 3.
int-THE SMOKECHOKED FRINGES.night

Off on the sidelines, hovering in the dim, noise-drowned recesses is AMY BLUE (18, a tiny raven-haired innocent beneath her hard, clad-in-goth-black image - like a teenage Anna Karina with an asymmetrical A-cut). Behind her, in the BG over the bar, a crude undergroundish sign declares "WELCOME TO HELL".

An unlit cigarette dangling from her ebony lips, Amy scowls (cutely) as she forages through her lunchbox/purse which is plastered with Cocteau Twins, Misfits, etc stickers.

AMY
Fuck.

Her rummaging grows more desperate.

AMY
Fuck, fuck, fuck, fuck, fuck...

PEANUT, a behemoth of a skinhead slathered with tattoos, approaches.

PEANUT
Hey Amy, got any crystal?

Amy looks at Peanut (he towers like a foot and a half above her), makes a gas face.

AMY
Fuck off

PEANUT
Shit, who pissed in your Fruit Loops?

AMY
Peanut, why don't you go passionately fuck yourself?

PEANUT
I can, y'know.

AMY
(sneering)
Yeah, I heard your dick is shaped like a banana.

PEANUT
It reaches spots you've never had touched before. Wanna take it for a test
spin?

AMY
I'd rather be shot point blank in the head.

PEANUT
Amy, you're about as charming as a pus-encrusted herpes lesion. Anybody
ever told you that?

Amy makes another, uglier gas face, resumes searching through her lunchbox.

The song ends and Jordan, like a warrior staggering off the battlefield in a Kurosawa film, comes over. His pink, hairless nipples protruding from the remnants of his decimated shirt, he wraps an arm around Amy, kisses her sweetly on the cheek.

AMY
(recoiling)
Yuk, you're all sweaty.

JORDAN
(unfazed by her bitchiness)
Whatcha lookin' for?

AMY
My skull lighter. I swear, if it's gone, I'll slit my wrists.

PEANUT
Now that would be a great loss to the human race.

AMY
(holding up her middle finger)
Sit and spin.

PEANUT
(to Jordan, ignoring her)
Hey, Jordan. Y'know what the difference between a pussy and a cunt is?

Jordan shrugs.

PEANUT
(glowering at Amy while delivering the punchline)
A pussy is a nice, warm, comfortable place and a cunt is the person who
owns it.

Yukyukyukking it up, Peanut disappears into the dark recesses. Amy rolls her eyes.

AMY
That guy has the intelligence of a stool sample.

JORDAN
(reaching into his pocket)
He's OK.
(takes out his own lighter, gallantly lights her cigarette)
I think he's got brain damage. But he's OK.

Amy takes a deep, deep drag from her cig.

AMY
I cannot breathe.

JORDAN
(full of affection)
Maybe if you cut down to like ten packs a day...

AMY
I smoke because I'm hoping for an early death. Duh.
(coughs a couple times)
This place is so fucking boring I wish someone would burn it to the
ground.

JORDAN
(another shrug)
It's not that boring.

Amy blows out a tense stream of smoke.

AMY
Let's get the fuck out of here.

JORDAN
'K.

He looks at her (and we notice now as the seedy light strikes his face just so, how genuinely beautiful he is - with a face like an angel and infinitely dark eyes that you could just swim in forever...).

JORDAN
Wanna go to Heaven?

Amy takes another drag, shrugs indifferently.

AMY
I guess.

cut to

4. 4.
ext.HEAVEN-night

Token TRACKING SHOT across the local staked-out turf known as "Heaven" which resembles ruins leftover from the last A-Bomb test (in actuality it's the rotting, abandoned lot of a deceased drive-in theatre). Cars doing donuts. Dueling stereos blasting out competing trendy NOIZE. KIDS of all sizes, shapes and colors loitering, getting high, screwing, y'know, doing all that Rebellious Youth stuff.

We're TRAILING a NEONAZI-TYPE, no shirt, muscles, bitchin tattoos, a SNAKE draped over his shoulders like a mink stole, who zigzags through the flotsam and jetsam on his skateboard with MUSIC ("Sex On Wheelz" by THRILL KILL KULT or some such thing) cascading from his ghettoblaster.

The CAMERA comes to rest at an ultra-cool, faded sky-blue '70 Ford Torino with totally fogged-up windows.


5. 5.
int-TORINO.night

Steam condenses and forms droplets on the windshield. A shrunken head dangles from the rearview mirror and there's tons of weird gothic toys and knickknacks populating the dashboard.

We hear the OS panting and rustling of teen sex in progress.

AMY (OS)
Go ahead and stick it inside.

Shifting and struggling.

AMY (OS)
C'mon.

More moving around, repositioning.

AMY (OS)
Jordan, put your dick in me.

JORDAN (OS)
I'm tryin'...

There's a heavy sigh.
Finally, Jordan sits up (looking especially lovely in the diffuse backlight) in the passenger half of the immense frontseat.

JORDAN
(staring out his window)
I'm sorry. I just...

AMY (OS)
What?

Jordan stares out his window some more.

JORDAN
I'm afraid of catching AIDS.

AMY (OS)
But we're both virgins.

Jordan looks at her. Starts fishing through the glove compartment.

JORDAN
Where's the fuckin cigarettes?

Amy sits up into the frame (she's shirtless too) and removes a pack of Death cigarettes from under the visor on her side. She takes one, hands another to Jordan. Like a ritual, he lights her cig first, then his.

JORDAN
I dunno what it is, but I feel really weird tonight. Like something's gonna
happen.

AMY
(inhaling a drag)
Me too.

Jordan looks at her.

JORDAN
You hate me now, don't you?

Amy looks at him.

AMY
No. Dork.
(she gives him a tender, reassuring kiss on the lips)

Jordan looks at Amy for a significant beat, his cigarette smoldering.

JORDAN
Hey, Amy...
(his liquid eyes shimmering)
Do you love me?

Amy looks at him.

AMY
Yeah. Totally.
(drags on her cig)
Why?

Jordan shrugs.

JORDAN
(tracing designs in the moisture collected on his window)
It's just "I love you" can mean a lot of things, like "You'll do till someone
better comes along", or "I can't describe how I really feel but I know I'm
supposed to say this", or "Shut up, I'm watchin' TV"...

Amy gives him a look.

AMY
Are you stoned?

They crack up. Amy blows a trio of perfect smokerings.

AMY
I think sometimes this city is sucking away my soul. Like yesterday I was
stuck in this humongous traffic jam on the 405 freeway and I just couldn't
wait to get to the dead bodies lying there on the bloody asphalt. All I cared
about was getting out and moving again...

JORDAN
I know. I feel like a gerbil smothering in Richard Gere's butthole.

They young lovers' eyes meet as they wallow together in their Tortured Teen Sadness.
They kiss again, gently with their moist, pouty lips. Look at each other some more.

AMY
There just is no place for us in this world.

At that moment, a BODY is hurled against their windshield with such force it makes a loud, cracking THUD. A gang of four BIG GOONS clad in hideous retro-70s fashions (like Redd Kross on steroids) descend upon the Body, pummelling him with fists, brass knuckles, ninja sticks, etc.

BIG GOON 1
Wake up, cocksucker! It's time to DIE.

The Body rolls into a fetal ball, shielding himself from his attacker's blows and removing something from his left DocMarten... a SWITCHBLADE, which he lashes out in a vicious arc, badly slicing two of the Goons.

All of this happens so fast Amy and Jordan can only sit and stare.

There's JUMPCUT blood, confusion.

AMY
(finally reacting)
Hey! Get off my fuckin car!

She starts HONKING the horn which only adds to the chaos.

Then, before Amy and Jordan can blink, the Body materializes, like lightning in a bottle, inside the car, in the passenger seat, literally on Jordan's lap. And we get our first good look at XAVIER RED (22, intensely sexy, industrial haircut, his perfect face spattered with crimson blood spangles, and his eyes, electric blue enough normally, juiced up past overload given the circumstances). Locking the door behind him, he waves the red dripping knife at Amy and Jordan (who're still half-naked by the way), with more desperation than menace.

XAVIER
Pedal to the metal, sweetheart!

The two remaining Goons, whipped up into a murderous frenzy, POUND on the doors and windows of the Torino.

AMY
(screaming at the Goons outside)
You're denting my fucking car!

XAVIER
(going absolutely insane)
Yo, bitch, would you just GO??!

JORDAN
uh...Amy...

AMY
(going alittle berserk herself)
GET YOUR FUCKING HANDS OFF MY CAR!!!!

She fires up the engine and REVS it with a very impressive, testosterone-charged ROAR.

AMY
(muttering)
Goddamnmotherfucking....

She stomps on the gas and tires SQUEALING, the Torino nearly mows down the hate-crazed Goons. The G-force sends Xavier tumbling into the backseat, causing him to accidentally cut himself on the leg with his knife.

XAVIER
...fuck..!..

6. 6.
The Torino peels out of the garbage-strewn lot, leaving the Goons behind in the dust. As it speeds away, we SEE the car's tail end which is plastered with death, gloom and industrial stickers as well as one that proclaims "EAT SHIT AND DIE MOTHERFUCKER".
cut to

v.o.1 v.o.1
BLACK (4seconds)

SOUND PULLUP
The road rumbling by, SKINNY PUPPYish TORTURE on the stereo.

AMY (OS)
I swear, if there is one dent in the door, one scratch in the paint...
cut to

7. 7.
int-BACKSEAT.night

Xavier examining his flesh wound (located dangerously close to the crotch of his holy levis), trying to stop the flow of blood trickling out.

XAVIER
What the fuck're you talking about? OW...
(wincing in pain)
This car is older than you and your jaibait boyfriend combined...

Amy turns to glare at him.

AMY
I love this car.
(horrified)
OhmyGOD, you're getting blood all over the upholstery!

XAVIER
Jesus, don't potty in your panties about it.

He starts wiping up the blood with the tail of his Revolting Cocks t-shirt.

AMY
Jordan, he is bleeding all over my upholstery!

JORDAN
It's OK Amy, he's cleanin' it up.

Jordan, hanging over the seat, gazes at the red stuff coming from Xavier's basket area.

JORDAN
You alright, man?

XAVIER
Sure. I'm totally into getting the fuck beat out of me and slicin' up my own fuckin leg...

AMY
You are really fuckin rude. Y'know that? You are really fuckin rude.

Xavier rolls his eyes and finding a rag, starts tying a makeshift bandage around his upper thigh.

JORDAN
Hey, that's my shirt.

XAVIER
(looks at it)
Oh... sorry

ANDY
It's cool. Go ahead, use it.

AMY
That is so gross.

ANDY
So who were those guys back there anyway?

XAVIER
(finally stopping the bleeding)
Assholes. Dickheads. Fanatical Young Republicans.

Xavier pulls the bandage taut around his muscular leg and CLICKS his blade shut, sliding it back into its proper place inside his left Doc Marten. In the nocturnal blue luminescence of the backseat, we notice now just how mesmerizingly, almost supernaturally handsome he is, vibrating with dangerous sexuality and a tragic vulnerability. You can tell by looking into his fathomless eyes that he's had a totally fucked up, crazy couple decades on the planet.

He starts distractedly gazing out his window.

JORDAN (OS)
What's your name, anyway

7.A 7.A
XAVIER'S POV
A split-second SLO-MO blur. A lone illuminated billboard message in the darkness: "Don't Give Up. PRAY." passes by.

7.cont 7.cont
BACK TO SCENE

XAVIER
huh?

JORDAN
What's your name?

Xavier looks at Jordan: their eyelines connecting like a livewire electrical system.

XAVIER
Xavier.

JORDAN
What?

XAVIER
(a tired routine)
Xavier. That's X-avier. Not "Hah-vee-ay". Not "Zay-veer". X-avier.

JORDAN
oh.

AMY
That's the stupidest fuckin name I've ever heard.

JORDAN
Is it cool if I just call you "X"? I can't really pronounce all that...

XAVIER
Only if I get to call you "Nutlicker".

Jordan laughs with boyish bashfulness. Amy just scowls.

AMY
If bullshit were music, you'd be a big brass band.

XAVIER
(studying Amy with a sly smile)
What's with your lady here, Jordan? Terminal PMS?

AMY
Fuck you.

XAVIER
(excited now, feeding vampirelike off her spunky energy)
No. Fuck you, you stinkin' kootch. Fuck you, you big wet bearded
clam!

AMY
FUCK. YOU!

XAVIER
(gleeful)
Fuck you, Fuck your mother, Fuck your brother, Fuck your ugly
dog
...
cut to

8. 8.
ext-ROADSIDE.night

The Torino SCREECHES to a halt in the shadow of a gigantic, surreal, all-lit-up oil refinery which looms, spewing poison into the blackness like some menacing death factory.

Amy leaps out of the idling auto, holding the door open.

AMY
Get OUT of my fucking car!

JORDAN
(sticking his head out)
C'mon, Amy. He didn't mean it. He's just jokin' around...
(to Xavier)
Right X? Tell her...

Amy stands there, her breath forming clouds and her nipples hardening in the crispy night air.

XAVIER
(sticking his head out too, his eyes all atwinkle)
Yeah, Amy. Don't get your uterus all tied in a knot.

AMY
(practically poking Xavier's eye out with her finger)
Listen, gism-breath. I want you out of my car right this fucking
second.

XAVIER
(to Jordan)
Is she always this aggressive, Jordo?

Jordan doesn't even have time to reply before Amy grabs Xavier by his t-shirt collar. They're face-to-face in an intensely tight CU.

AMY
I'm not kidding, Scumfuck. Get. Lost.

They have a long stare-off, their faces so close they're practically kissing...
Xavier takes this opportunity to lick his upper lip (the tip of his tongue barely grazes Amy's lips in the process). Then, as he sumptuously bites his thick lower lip, a smile, so sexy it's actually scary, creeps over his face.

XAVIER
You're, uh, giving me an erection.

AMY
You're repugnant.

Xavier's only response to Amy's fury is a bigger, more sinister smile (like he's either on drugs or just plain fucking crazy...).

XAVIER
OK, Miss America. You win...
(looks heavenward)
Beam me up, Scotty.

He and Amy retreat, disappearing off opposite sides of the frame, leaving Jordan's RACK-FOCUSED face in the BG center.

XAVIER
(to Jordan as he exits)
Later, gator.

He gets out of the car.

JORDAN
Hey, what about my shirt?

Xavier looks down at the blood-soaked rag wrapped around his thigh. Smiling, he removes it and tosses it back to Jordan who catches it in mid-air.

JORDAN
Thanks, X.

He slips the still-warm, moist, red-stained thing back on over his lean torso.

XAVIER
My pleasure, Nutlicker.

Without a word, Amy marches back to the car, steps in and SLAMS the door shut. Xavier leans over toward her window and looks into her eyes with sincere

XAVIER
(beaming)
Will you marry me?

Amy makes a face full of hate and tromps on the gas pedal.
The Torino tears off into the night, with Jordan waving goodbye forlornly from his window.

XAVIER
(yelling after them)
Don't worry about decidin' right away. I mean, IT'S NOT LIKE I NEED
AN ANSWER IMMEDIATELY. YOU CAN THINK ABOUT IT
A WHILE, SLEEP ON IT!!....

9. 9.
CU
Xavier growing tinier and tinier in the rearview mirror, ranting and raving, like a miniature Beetlejuice. PAN and RACK to Jordan who turns from the mirror to Amy who stares stonefaced at the road ahead.

JORDAN
(shaking his head)
I swear, Amy. You can be so harsh.

Amy says nothing.

JORDAN
I dunno, he seemed cool. Kinda strange maybe...

AMY
He was an anus-face.

JORDAN
What were we talkin' about the other day, about trying to be less
judgemental of people?...

AMY
Fuck that.

Jordan can tell she's not exactly in the mood for a discussion (they've been going out for a long time after all (three months), and hey, he's a sensitive guy). He changes the subject.

JORDAN
I'm starvin'. Stop at the next QuickieMart, 'K?

Amy drives in silence.
cut to

10. 10.
int-QUICKIEMART.night

Gross CU
Bright fuchsia raspberry slushie oozing plasmalike out of the stainless steel dispenser.

Smacking his lips, Jordan finishes filling his extra-large sportsbottle and licks the excess slushie gobs from the lid with his pink tongue. He plunks his drink down on the "food area" counter next to his three SuperJumbo footlong hotdogs which are piled obscenely high with relish, ketchup, onions, etc. It's an aesthetic/gastronomical nightmare.

JORDAN
Sure y'don't want anything?

AMY
(tensely dragging on a cig)
I'm speeding, remember?

JORDAN
oh yeah.

CLERK (OS)
Hey. No smoking in store, girlie.

Amy turns to find the CLERK, a vile-looking Vietnamese guy with a Coors cap on, leering at her. Behind him, his three Kewpie Doll KIDS sit in a row, totally decked out in Ninja Turtles merchandise, staring transfixed at an ultraviolent shoot-em-up COP SHOW on a tiny portable TV.

AMY
(it really has been a rough night)
Jesus.

She demonstratively grinds her cig out on the upturned sole of her pointy black goth boot then defiantly drops the butt to the filthy linoleum. The Clerk sneers.

CLERK
Pick up... girlie.

Amy rolls her eyes, makes a belligerent (but cute) face.

AMY
Eat my fuck.

JORDAN
(wanting to avoid a scene)
Amy...

Casually, without fanfare, the Clerk pulls out a SAWED-OFF 12 GAUGE from behind the counter, points it at Amy and Jordan.

JORDAN
holy shit.

CLERK
Pick up, girlie.

(The Kids behind him are still totally oblivious. Actually, one of them, a little girl, looks up at her father nonchalantly - like this happens every night - and returns her attention to the TV.)

AMY
(with a sour expression, like she's smelled something bad)
I'm so sure.

She bends over, retrieving the butt (and the Clerk gets a gross thrill watching her nubile form straining at the seams of her tight, all black outfit). Then crosses to the trashcan and theatrically disposes of the incriminating butt.

AMY
(mega-smug smile)
We happy?

The Clerk nods, still holding his mighty gun on Amy while he rings up Jordan's titanic midnight snack.

CLERK
That be six dollar, sixtysix cents.

Anxious to get out of there, Jordan fishes through the pockets of his baggy levis.

JORDAN
(puzzled)
huh. That's weird. Must've fallen out in the car...

He looks towards Amy who rolls her eyes and sighs, annoyed.

JORDAN
I'll pay you right back...

Amy doesn't want to hear about it. She reaches into the inside pocket of her huge, thrashed leatherjacket. Searches for a minute... Then looks up at Jordan. The lightbulb of realization goes on simultaneously for both of them.

JORDAN AMY
oh fuck... ...The Scumfuck.

CLERK
(like a crazy singsong mantra)
Six dollar, sixtysix cents.

Jordan looks at Amy. Amy looks at Jordan (Like this is another fine mess...).

There's the CA-CHUK of the shotgun being cocked as the Clerk levels the barrel right at them.

AMY
You fuckin kook. We left our wallets in the car. Let me just run out and--

Amy's movement towards the door gets the gun aggressively aimed between her eyes. The Clerk shakes his head. Nuh uh. (It becomes clear that he gets some kind of kinky satisfaction from holding our teens, especially ripe passion flower Amy, at bay.)

CLERK
(one last time)
Six dollar. Sixtysix cents.

AMY
This is fuckin ridiculous.
(furious to the Clerk)
What're you gonna do, shoot us? Imean, what is this, some kind of joke -
like "Candid Camera" or something?

The Clerk makes no reply, only continuing to squint at Amy over the barrel of his raised gun...

SUDDENLY
in an arty ULTRA SLO-MO BLUR, a Figure bursts in from nowhere, tackling the evil Clerk. The shotgun goes of like a thunderclap, BLASTING the cigarette rack overhead, sending packs and stray cigs flying everywhere. (This fracas actually causes the Kids to look up from the TV, but that's all they do: look up. They don't scream, run for cover, nothing...)

It's (who else?)

XAVIER
(to the stunned Amy and Jordan)
Scram.

In the ensuing commotion, Jordan drops his hotdog fiasco to the floor, upsidedown, SPLAT. Amy runs for the door, scooping up a few packs of ciga on the way, while Jordan kipes a couple sixers of Bud from a nearby display (Imean, why not?).

The Clerk starts BABBLING in Vietnamese as his Kids just sit there watching, like a row of weird little robot monkeys.

AMY
(to Xavier, flabbergasted)
What the fuck d'you think you're doing?

XAVIER
(in the midst of a mortal struggle with the Clerk)
Saving your fucking life.

AMY
Did I ask you for any big favors? Huh?

JORDAN
(taking Amy by the arm)
Amy, c'mon....

AMY
Jordan, he is getting us into Deep Shit.

From the back storeroom, the Clerk's WIFE appears, wielding a LARGE MACHETE and likewise JABBERING in a foreign tongue. (Wearing one of those big rice farmer hats and a black peasant blouse, she could pass for an extra from The Killing Fields.)

WIFE
EEEEEEEEEEEEEYAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!

The Wife takes a slice at Xavier and ends up imbedding the blade in the plastic cash register which starts BLEEPING uncontrollably as the drawer flies open.

JORDAN
(getting a mite frantic)
Would you guys get the hell out of here?!

AMY
(annoyed)
Christ.

The Wife by now has joined the fracas, trying to pry Xavier off her husband. (And the Kids are still just watching like it's an episode of their favorite TV show.)

JORDAN
(dragging Amy towards the door)
Come on.

Just then, a gunshot EXPLODES OS. BLOOD sprays everywhere in the vicinity - the chattering Wife, the VitaminPaks, the neon pink-and-green sunglasses display, the row of Kids sitting there staring...

And the Clerk's head (just his HEAD, or what's left of it anyway) lands with a sickening THUK in the condiment bin across the room, right in the middle of the relish, onions and jalapeno peppers.

Xavier is left hugging a decapitated, bloodspewing corpse. Behind him, the Wife gapes in horror, making unsettling, animalish HOWLING sounds. And the weird Kids just keep on staring.

Amy and Jordan stand there, dumbstruck, looking first at Xavier, then across the room at the head perched upright in the condiment... It all seems like some insane, drug-induced hallucination.

Then crazily, it (the dismembered head) starts talking, emitting this guttural, unintelligible, scary-as-shit GIBBERISH (as well as a grody rivulet of oozy blood-juice).

Xavier, Amy and Jordan FREAK. Xavier drops the beheaded cadaver to the floor, and Amy and Jordan, petrified a second ago, now cannot scurry fast enough towards the door. Xavier follows, pausing only to snatch some greenery (which is spattered with blood and brain bits) from the gaping open register.
cut to


11. 11.
ext-QUICKIEMART PARKING LOT.night

Beneath the glaring, eerily pulsating fluorescents, the terrified threesome scramble for the car, falling all over themselves like postpunk-poseur Three Stooges - filmed in torturously protracted SLO, SLOOOOOOOO-MO.

We abruptly SHIFT to 24fps real-time as the trio pile into Amy's car and go SCREECHING off into the all-enveloping abyss.
cut to


V.O.2 V.O.2
BLACK (5 seconds)

SOUND PULLOVER
OS franticness. The car engine racing with angsty-torment-MUZIK (like "The Choke" or some such thing) hammering in the BG.

AMY (OS)
(Valspeak at 78rpm)
OhmyGodohmyGodohmyGod....

XAVIER (OS)
Relax. Relax.
cut to

12. 12.
int-TORINO.night

The threesome, squeezed into the frontseat, fritzing out.

XAVIER
...Would you please just fuckin chill??!

JORDAN
(in a daze, like he's way stoned)
...his head. His head, man. It was talkin'...

Amy takes a deep breath.

AMY
OhmyGod.

XAVIER
(struggling to maintain calm)
Listen, we're probably cool. Imean, that weirdo gook lady with the machete
probably doesn't even speak english... I think everything's gonna be fine.

AMY
What the fuck d'you mean "everything's gonna be fine"? You just blew
somebody's head off!

XAVIER
You just gotta be the pessimist all the time, don't you? Little Miss Gloom
and Gloom. Well, fuck you. You were there, you were both there with me...
and read my lips, we all go down together. I fry, we all fry...

AMY
Blow it out your crusty rectum, loser. We don't know you, we barely just
met you, and we certainly don't like you. You're fucking crazy and...
and... you're ugly besides.

XAVIER
(leans toward Amy, his eyes like road flares)
I love you too, darling.

The tension between the two of them could start a fire.

JORDAN
His fuckin head... it was in the relish 'n' onions 'n' it was talkin'...

Xavier loops his arms around both Amy and Jordan's necks in a twisted, muscular, sexual clench. Menacing and extremely seductive at the same time. A pact. With the bloody money gripped in his viselike hands.

XAVIER
We are up to our blowholes in trouble, compaņeros. But we're in it
together.

Amy and Jordan trade nervous glances. It's all so totally unreal, like a shared bad dream they'll wake up from soon. They both look at Xavier who has this very disturbing smile spreading over his face.

XAVIER
All for one and one for all.

AMY
(suddenly realizing)
Hey. Gimme my fuckin wallet back...
cut to

13. 13.
ext.THE FATHOMLESS VOID.night

The car ZOOMS in flight down the expressway to oblivion.
crossfade to


14. 14.
ext-SLEEP TIME MOTEL.night

The BUZZING, half-burntout neon sign. Freckled with dead bugs.
cut to


15. 15.
int-MOTEL ROOM.night

Utter blackness.
The SOUND of the key in the lock. Diffuse OS conversation.

JORDAN (OS)
I mean, don't y'think you oughta call your mom or something?

Amy opens the door, the blue neon filtering in behind the trio's ghostly silhouettes.

AMY
Tomorrow.

Amy CLICKS on the light: the room is sparse, anonymous, cheap. Depressing. Xavier trails the two of them, scoping out their new surroundings like he's casing the joint.

XAVIER
What? Mommy and Daddy'll be all worried about their baby girl?

AMY
(matter-of-fact)
My mom used to be a heroin addict; now she's a Scientologist. My old
man's dead.

XAVIER
oh, sorry.

AMY
I'm not. He was a bloated, alkie pig who was always trying to molest me.

XAVIER
(to Jordan)
How 'bout you?

JORDAN
My folks live in Encino.

XAVIER
Oh.

Xavier throws himself down on the queen-size bed (which we notice is the only one in the room). He interlaces his hands behind his head as his body bounces up and down rhythmically on the springy mattress.

XAVIER
My mom shot my dad then killed herself when I was twelve.

Amy and Jordan stand there looking at Xavier who just smiles. Whether he's telling the truth or not, Amy at this point could frankly care less. She rolls her eyes and heads towards the bathroom.

AMY
I'm taking a bath.

She exits.
cut to


BLACK (2 seconds)
cut to

16. 16.
int-BATHROOM.later

Amy sits naked in the tub in the steamfilled room the warm water comforting her like a good massage. Her hair all wet and straggly, her mascara running, she stares up at the ceiling. Weary, scared, she feeis the direness of her situation closing in on her like a noose as she listens to the relentless, unnerving DRIP-DRIP-DRIP of the bathdrain.
cut to


17. 17.
imt-MOTEL ROOM.night

TV
Some goofy DOG OBEDIENCE SCHOOL PROGRAM. This psychotic-looking LADY TRAINER giving lessons to a disinterested Lhasa Apso.

JORDAN (OS)
I love this show, man.

IN THE BLUE BEAM GLOW
Jordan zones out, drinking one of the stolen lukewarm Buds, his back up against the bed. Behind him, sitting cross legged on the mattress, Xavier unpeels his shirt, baring his smooth, tightly muscled torso. (Given the sleazy setting and the laconic sexiness of the boys, there's a strange deja vu feeling to the scenario: it's like some half-remembered blue movie.)

XAVIER
S'how Long've you 'n' Princess Leia been a happy little couple?

JORDAN
(sips on his brewski)
Fuck, a long time. Three months

Xavier lounges on the bed, his upsidedown head about a foot from Jordan's.

XAVIER
No way. Most of my relationships last about three days
(his gaze catching Jordan's like a butterfly in a net)
or three hours.

JORDAN
(a smile and another swig of beer)
Yeah, well, relationships bite.
(noticing)
Wow. Righteous tattoo.

(Xavier's got an elaborate, demonicallly bad-ass tat on his right shoulder which tendrils towards his erect nipple.)

XAVIER
(touching himself, tenderly, there)
Thanks.

JORDAN
(leaning close to get a better look)
I been wantin' one forever but I can't decide on a design I like enough to,
y'know, wear on my body for like the rest of my life. It's a big
commitment.

He stares as if hypnotized (or wasted) at the colorful ink surgically sewn into Xavier's supple flesh.

JORDAN
I sure do like yours alot though...

As he keeps gazing, the homoerotic tension between the boys rises like two horny dicks.

JORDAN
(abruptly belching)
I gotta take a whiz.

He gets up, leaves Xavier lying there, prone on the bed.
cut to

18. 18.
int-BATHROOM.night

Amy doesn't react at all when Jordan comes in, still clinging to his nearly-drained Bud like a pacifier.

JORDAN
Hi.

AMY
Hi.

JORDAN
I gotta piss.

Amy looks at him like "Yeah. So?"

Jordan goes over to the toilet. Undoes his jeans and takes a long, loud pee. The SOUND of it fills the warm, moist space. Amy looks at Jordan. Jordan looks back at Amy. They're suspended there a minute: him standing by the toilet, her dripping in the tub.

Everything - their confusion, teenage doubt, insecurity, fear, their goofy strange love - all that and more flows silently between them like electrical current.

Not even bothering to stuff his still dribbling, semi-erect (though, of course, discretely OS) cock back into his pants, Jordan goes over to Amy and sets his beer bottle down with a THUNK. The two lovers begin passionately sucking face, becoming a pretzel of grabbing hands and intertangling limbs. As they both work to rip Jordan's clothes off, Amy pulls her semi-naked boyfriend into the hot water and they make insane, violent love: their hormone~charged, pentup emotion transformed into raw, obsessive fucking. They're like two terrified animals slaughtering each other.
back to


19. 19.
int-MOTEL ROOM.night

TV
The DOG TRAINING SHOW gets ZAPPED in a flurry of restless CHANNEL-SWITCHING. Random FLASHFRAGMENTS of Video America: THE HOME SHOPPING CLUB, quasi-pornographic Soloflex COMMERCIALS, dopey SITCOM RERUNS, old COLORIZED MOVIES... then a HANDHELD NFWSCAMERA POV of the horrific carnage at the QuickieMart comes on...


19A. 19A.
XAVIER
rolls over on the bed, staring at the fiickering screen.
19B. 19B.
NEWSWOMAN (VO)
Now some of this footage may be too gruesom for some audience
so viewer discretion is advised...

TV
Just incredible gore. Grisly shots of the blood~covered store, the Clerk's head sitting in the condiment tray...

NEWSWOMAN (VO)
Police say that the severed head of QuickieMart proprietor, Nguyen Kok-
Suk, was still talking when it was discovered, at approximately
2:39 am, this morning, by a Jerseymaid deliveryman...

MORE TV
More gore. Footage of the Wife and Kids, all likewise dead. Their corpses swimming in huge pools of blood.
NEWSWOMAN (VO)
...And the San Fernando Valley Sheriffs Department is still investigating the
bizarre, ritualistic slaying of Suk's wife and children as well...

19C. 19C.
TV
Inside the NEWSROOM, the Mademoiselle-ish NEWSWOMAN sits next to her very serious-looking GQ-clone CO-ANCHORPERSON.

NEWSWOMAN
(continued)
It appears that the Shopkeeper's wife, who is believed to be an illegal
alien, was so distraught over the slaying of her husband that she took the
lives of her children, disemboweling them...

CO-ANCHORPERSON
Wait just a second there... disemboweling them?

NEWSWOMAN
Yes, Chet, that's right, dis-em-boweling them, before taking the knife to
herself in some kind of unusual suicide rite.

CO-ANCHORPERSON
(shaking his head with rehearsed remorse)
Tragic.

NEWSWOMAN
Isn't it, though? And the police so far have only one clue to the identity of
Mr. Suk's murderer or murderers...

19D. 19D.
TV
INSERT CU of a tiny silver skull earring held in a pair of police forceps.

NEWSWOMAN (VO)
This skull earring, the type sold most frequently in rock'n'roll paraphernalia
shops on Melrose and on Hollywood Boulevard...
cutaway to

18A. 18A.
EERIE, SLO-MO MOS CU
Jordan's devouring Amy's neck in oblivious ecstasy. Creeping ZOOM in on the empty hole in his pierced left ear.

NEWSWOMAN (VO)
(continuing)
...Often worn by homosexuals satanists and members of other dangerous
cult groups...
back to

19C. 19C.
TV
The Stepford Wifelike Newscasters.

CO-ANCHORPERSON
Hold it, Sandy. Correct me if I'm wrong, but don't lots of people,
especially trendy teenagers following the latest "fad", kids who are
otherwise perfectly "normal", don't they wear earrings similar to the one
shown here?

NEWSWOMAN
Yes, well, Chet, that is a problem...
back to

19A. 19A.
XAVIER
blankly taking this all in like it's an acid flashback or something. Finally giving up on the media vaudeville, he rolls off the bed.
cut to

19E. 19E.
int-HALLWAY

Approaching the bathroom, Xavier peers through a lit crack in the door.


18B. 18B.
HIS POV
of Amy and Jordan going at it in the tub. Trying, not very successfully, to contain their teen sex-whimpering.
19E. 19E.
BACK TO SCENE
Xavier is fascinated and enormously aroused by what he's seeing. CAMERA TILTS down following his hand as it delves into the dark recesses beneath the waistband of his torn levis. As he begins to stroke himself, the buttons of his worn fly start opening all by themselves.

CU
Tight on Xavier's enraptured face as we hear the OS rustle of his pants coming apart and slipping down...
intercut


18B./19E. 18B./19E.
SERIES OF SHOTS
Amy, Jordan and Xavier rapidly approaching orgasm, framed progressively tighter, tighter, tighter. The CUTS build in speed. rhythm and intensity, coming faster and faster until all three of them reach a wild, brutal simultaneous climax (with Amy and Jordan practically drowning each other in the process).

(After this strenuous bit of MONTAGE, the film calms down some, breathing easier, as both the compositions and the editorial pace relax...)


19E. 19E.
Xavier is left with a gooey mess on his hands. He goes to get something (his own discarded t-shirt) to wipe himself with.
cut to

20. 20.
int-BATHROOM.night

Amy and Jordan are out of breath but at the same time, totally wired, trembling in the aftermath of their carnal knowledge. Amy leans back, letting her head tip into the warm water while Jordan sprawls over the edge of the white tub. He looks over at her and unable to restrain himself, bursts out laughing. Amy starts laughing too, submerging her whole head underwater.

Amy spits a mouth flil of water at Jordan which starts a huge splashing water fight (they're acting like the kids they never truly got the chance to be). In their horsing around, Jordan slips on the slick porcelain and KABONKS his head on the tiled rim.

JORDAN
SHIT. Owwww...

Blood begins flowing from his nose, red liquid trickling all over his hands, on Amy's nude body, dripping into the tepid water. Amy is grossed out by the spectacle, but giggles at the same time.

AMY
Smooth move, ex-lax.

JORDAN
Oh, man...

AMY
Here. Pinch the bridge of your nose.

JORDAN
Huh?

AMY
(reaching over to demonstrate)
Pinch it. There...

SUDDENLY
The door is KICKED OPEN, causing both Amy and Jordan to just about jump out of their wet, taut skin.

XAVIER
I'm so fuckin hungry I could eat my leg. How 'bout a little foodular action?

Amy and Jordan, stark naked, dripping water and blood, just look at Xavier who stands over them grinning.

XAVIER
C'mon, you fornicators.